I miss it dear the
Way we touched
Don’t get me wrong
Now things are great
But I want what use to be
Until it is too late
When a simple touch was all it took
To bring you to the edge
But now it seems that only more
Keeps us off the Narrow ledge
When we would
Take those long ass drives
With no destination in our minds
When a slow kiss
Would make you smile
And have to catch your breathe
But now it seems
Fear sly is the only
Option left
I know there I play a part too
But can’t you see I want the old you
A contest entry
- Let It All Out by BeautifulDisaster9.
525 points, ended May 10, 2007, 21 entries
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Comments
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awwwww
i hate the way love plays out, but during the love i adore every part of the relationship.. it just seems like you don't give yourself a variety of options and you strap yourself down to one thing.. are you a taurus by chance? jk.. anyways, it was an okay write for me -
Oh. Em. Gee.
This is great. I can relate to this in my life now. I feel like you took my current relationship and captured it in a poem. Just...WOW. So, Uh, Yeah. Keep writing, you're great.
Best of luck and thanks for entering.
<3BeautifulDisaster9
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