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Mother Of Mine

Mother of mine
How much we’ve been through
The birth full of pain
That’s only the begnning

Growing up you were always there
Nothing could stop you
To your four-year-old little girl
You were a super hero

That little girl grew up
Slowly but surly
However you never seemed to change
Always My Superhero

Despite the fights
Despite the screams
I love you mother
From now till always

As a young woman I see thing differently
I know now why you did what you did
Maybe not all of it
And things you do know still confuse me

I know you love me mother
And I know I don’t say it enough
You are my rock
You keep me together

You share so much with me
Treat me like I’m an adult
You trust me with so much
It’s how I know you love me

But I need to say it more
I love you mom
I always will
Nothing will ever change that

We’ve been through so much
Just the two of us
You a single parent
I a stubborn child growing

Through Hospital visits
Screaming matches
And break down days
I will always love you

Remember that mother
No matter what happens
I want you to know


I Love You

Author notes

Dedicated to my still living mother, I hope she realizes how much she means to me

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  • butterflytears
    May 2, 2007
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    awe...laneyshape, it's really good...good luck on the contest!


  • ButterflyforChrist
    May 2, 2007

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    Beautiful

    This brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for sharing this with me!

    I am going to be picky. lol.. But I think when you say "though" in your first, 9th and 10th stanzas that you meant "through".

    Beautiful Job!!