I can't take the way you said it
That everything would be fine
How is it you were so blind
When you told me those little lies
Letting me think that you loved me
Making me belive all you said
Well now that I'm sad again
Tomorrows cancelled
So don't make plans
It won't come back
Theres not even a chance
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Let It All Out by BeautifulDisaster9.
525 points, ended May 10, 2007, 21 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Short but yet to the point.
You did a good job of conveying feelings and emotions with few words.
Clever too - -
I agree with MinutelyNumb, it is short, yet very expressive.
Well done, best of luck and thanks for entering.
<3BeautifulDisaster9 -
wow. i like this one. its how i felt when i lost the one i loved.
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hey!! I loved this one..esp the second para...its like ur saying thats it dude..get ur butt off here...there aint anything left...this is short yet very expressive and very strong as well!! Loved it so much!!
Good luck !!
preets
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