Chorus
Hey babe, this aint no free ride
Take a look at me, I've nothing to hide
If it's love you want, I'll be by your side
But hey babe, I'm not a free ride
I had a feeling that you wanted more
But that aint what your looking for
Can't you see who I am
Honey you make me more than a man
The way it is, is all brand new
Can't you see that I love you
And if these words, don't fit your mouth
Then it's time for me to go on south
Chorus
Cause honey,
This ain't no free ride
And all of a sudden I'm lonely inside
If it's love you want, I'll stand by your side
But baby, Oh sweetheart
This ain't no free ride
And now that I've waited far too long
It's you that I've needed, is that so wrong
I know in this heart it's you that I need
Can't you see alone that I bleed
Love never meant to hurt and cause pain
But for once I just wish for you to remain
Chorus
Cause baby,
This aint no free ride
I need to know what your feeling inside
If it's love you want then stay by my side
Honey just tell me...this aint no free ride
Listen babe...I'm lonely inside..
Author notes
I have written a few lyrics over the years but really have no idea if I'm any good or if it makes sense to the musician...I tend to put myself inside the mind of a male, as I'm a big fan of blues...
A contest entry
- **Blue Eyes and Secret Smiles by madgirlslovesong.
525 points, ended May 29, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is really good
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i think that this would make a fabulous song! idk if u know them but it reminds me a little of the band Boys Like Girls.
anyways, great work! thank you for entering! -
The flow is so nicely done I can put my own music to the words~ Whoot Nice job!
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I love this ... I think I might try to put some chords to it....
See what I can do....
Really well done, I'm very impressed...
Jeffro -
Wow Kym, this is really good. Have you ever had anyone use one of your songs? You are very talented aren't you
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AH,go to www.Songwriters.com and submit this...i approve. I is great.
I will have to keep you in mind because i get emails from a couple songwriting contest websites. Ya just never know....
THis is good. Patti
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