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Dark Night


The night was eerie
Conspiratorial
Condescending

Lightning struck
Incessantly
Rivers burst their banks
Trees drowned

Morning came
Sadly bearing news
Of the death of Chinjakuku
Swept by the raging floods.

Fare thee well, Chinjakuku
Meet you land yonder
Surfing.

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  • Heart Sutra
    May 16, 2007
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    Interesting. Thank you for sharing this with the contest.


  • AJ Morelli gold member
    May 13, 2007
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    very nice, thanks for the entry...

    al