this world will break your heart
like hairline cracks in the chest
just as man is singly pulled apart
this world will break your heart
with confusion of where to start
in each season of refrain and rest
this world will break your heart
like hairline cracks in the chest
A contest entry
- Empty Vessel by Heart Sutra.
950 points, ended May 17, 2007, 23 entries
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lovely entry, thank you...
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