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Knockout Beauty...

KNOCKOUT BEAUTY...


Wuz it from birth
Of being born on2 this Earth
Which she obtain
KNOCKOUT BEAUTY...that she maintain
From preschool
Did the boys drool?
Middle school did her pretty grow N2 KNOCKOUT BEAUTY...
& sustain
No loses only gains
The kutenezz of the gurl next door,U jumped up at the fence 2 C her take a dip N the swimming pool
2 C her fitting swim suit
With camera phones directed her way ready 2 aim & shoot
Hoping theres no dead give away
taken pictures of her when her bedroom blinds wuz up while changing 4 the third time that day
KNOCKOUT BEAUTY...is all U can say
As she lay
Out flouting what MaMa gave her
The life of a GODDEZZ which 2 most WETT DREAMS she seems 2 B a Savior
KNOCKOUT BEAUTY...
From the muscularity of Ur arms 2 her abs attention grabs U like U want 2 grab her bi the ankles rubbing up 2 her calves & thighs caressing her booty
2 Referee her daily life thats a match U feel it should B Ur pleazure & duty
2 help this SINsational kutie
That when N pink
She flashes like lights leaving U unable 2 clearly think
Str8
AZZ she tag N her mate
KNOCKOUT BEAUTY...4 goodnezz sakes


written4: http://www.myspace.com/talia_doll 
writtenBi: http://blog.myspace.com/mentalseductionz
5-01-07

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  • Sapphire Rose
    May 3, 2007

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    Oh my god, someone actually does write poetry with chatspeak. I pity your lazy mind for not using proper grammar like I had asked. If you don't fix this little problem, I won't consider it an entry.