Into the Blue,
Into the Blue,
Bibrau is the girl who sits in the blue
Blue
a bird soaring high through the sky
a wave crashing onto the sea
I look to seek
and there she sits
in the blue
I traveled the world seeking answers
but
answers traveled so not to be found
why did she leave
no
why she does she sit
I see her every where i look
cold sky
cold sea
cold air
blue her color her moment
always there
I cannot find her
yet she is always there
so I must go
into the blue
into the sea
magic
what brought us together
Now
is
what
tears
us
apart
maybe this one last call
will bring her back
call
call
call
always just a call
Into the Blue,
Into the Blue,
Bibrau is the girl who sits in the blue
Into the Blue,
Into the Blue,
Bibrau is the girl who sits in the blue
Author notes
Into the Blue,
Into the Blue,
Bibrau is the girl who sits in the blue
To me Bibrau is a little girl who died and her father is trying to cope with the death by calling out to her.
just as we do today coping with the death of a loved one, when we see them in the faces around us, the sky the earth the air, all remind us of the ones we miss so we call out to them trying to find our way and answers to questions we have
A contest entry
- Be My Bard; Spin Me a Tale! by FaeRae.
1050 points, ended May 16, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Well Done
Great piece here. It's just stunning to see a great work come together. -
Beautiful & Sad
This was so beautiful and sad; such a tale! And so well written. This was just really . . . powerful!
Thanks so much for entering!
***Rae*** -
Into the Blue,
Into the Blue,
Bibrau is the girl who sits in the blue
To me Bibrau is a little girl who died and her father is trying to cope with the death by calling out to her.
just as we do today coping with the death of a loved one, when we see them in the faces around us, the sky the earth the air, all remind us of the ones we miss, sorry i havnt been on this site in a while so i had to write this down here i could not find authors comment box or the edit button
hurthear -
Wow! Great job. I've missed your poetry...keep writing!
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