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The Anatomy and Scientific Exposition of My Actions

Like an acid
Neutralizing with a base
A steady cloud of fumes
Burning my esophagus
And at once
The catalysts; the driving forces; the science
Is nothing but literary devices
Torn from data and transformed into jokes
So, everything evens out in the end
From this view; between acid, between bases
I am able to just be
And now, I want something to neutralize my frustrations
Like a blanket of smoke
To slowly cradle me to a better place

Then and only then
Am I able to just be

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  • Unnamed Feelings
    May 3, 2007

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    Mixing science and drugs, eh?
    I like it!
    Intelligently worked yet still made the point, nice one