I wrote you a poem once a long time ago.
It spoke of the passion and the love I had for you.
Such feelings I thought I would never know.
This I knew was true.
Something changed in me,
And I think you as well.
Maybe we weren’t meant to be,
At the time I thought, oh well.
But soon I felt conviction,
I was sorry for what I had done.
Too late was the realization,
I knew you were the one.
It took some time,
Longer than I would have wished.
I knew you had to be mine,
Your embrace, oh how it was missed.
But all that has been done away,
Sealed with a kiss.
Your love I will never betray,
Though your touch I shall surely miss.
Author notes
I recently got back together with my ex and this is the first poem i have had a chance to write about it, though im sure more will come.
A contest entry
- PROVE YOU'RE WORTHY OF MY POINTS by EmeraldDaze.
480 points, ended June 5, 2007, 59 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - If You Click, You Can Enter- No New Effort Needed! (fOR EVERYONE ON AP- NO ONE IS LEFT OUT) by duana.
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Great poem
GREAT job!
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hey, yeah it's too bad you pickjed this poem as your worst- because you have shown amazing growth as a poet.
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You have a unique style of writing. I read all 37 writes you have. I really enjoyed "hear the song." That is an amazingly good write. I like "Battle Rap" as well. You did very well with both of those....
As far as worst... I'm not sure if this would be classified as your worst. "Stop, sit, wait and think" mmmm I'd have to say would be in the running. All your other pieces clearly out class both of those writes...
Thanks for entering the contest~ I wish you the best of luck~ Remember I am only one of the voters, not the sole judge... I liked this write, better than I liked Stop, sit... This really isn't a bad write.
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well good
this is amazing.. it really makes me feel the same way for my ex... brilliant write.. keep it up =]
xx
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I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem~ Keep up the good work~ Good luck to you in the contest!
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I think this poem could be much better with a little work, right now it doesn't flow well, but it is still good. Thank you for entering my contest.
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Aww, so sweet. I loved this, and it's really pretty. I'll have to check out more of your work, nice job.
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Hmmm....good flow.
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I just going to put that i agree with everyone else.
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OH MY GOD! this is amazing, i love it, it really says something wonderful, something i've been trying to capture in my poems for a while! good job! keep it up
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Beautiful! You have a wonderful way with words. Your love is very lucky! =)
Great write, my brother. =)
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This is so sweet. As usual, your way with words prove how romantic you are!
Great write - good flow and use of rhymes. Very nice.
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