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I dreamt of a nightmare

Well my dreams, dreams their my everything
Nightmares of murders and candy blood sing
me to my realm of consciousness
From which state i constantly drift

This dazed illusion is one a shrink cant fix

Vampires hide in my mirrors
Feeding off the reflection of my thoughts
Midnight eyes with a smile that could kill
And since this is my dream, oh they will

My Barbie dolls are tripping on acid
Fornicating with every step
Naked plastic hasn't failed me yet

Infants whispering in my ear all these things i should regret

Cute little cannibal jack in the box
Cyanide lemonade, road kill fox.

Full fledged genocide.
Suicide watch.

Half moon where orchids dance with out care.
Sugar coated spiders filling the air.

Torn up butterflys in your cocaine
Sinful daggers that glint in the rain

Oh how i love these whimsical things
These childish fantasies that my subconscious brings

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My lovely dreams

You can't help but laugh

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  • Hata mig
    September 14, 2007
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    Judging tomorrow! Please change your background to something not plain!

  • Hata mig
    August 25, 2007
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    ummm...i'm not exactly laughing...but it is pretty cool...I'd like to take a breif moment to point out that your bg is plain...which, silly as it is, is against the rules...(I know it's stupid, but it's not my fault, I just work here! ) anywho I really do like this...it's both creepy and just flat out bizzare...good luck in the contest!

    ~Avan~


  • CherylAnn
    May 5, 2007
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    Dark yet Beautifully Written

    Dreams
    A great write you have penned filled with awesome imagery.Nightmares for children can really be scary and you have shown that in an amazing way.The whole feel of the write left me tingling with chills.I thought it to be very informative to the reader.Thanks for sharing
    Blessings
    ~Cheryl~