i wish i could hold you
feel your warm body against mine
to finally see your smiling face
our hearts and souls entwined
we have so much in common
and we've fallen so deeply in love
just to hear your voice over the phone
sends me to cloud nine above
the future is never certain
but it looks promising for us
i love you now, and will forever
for in you i've found love and trust
A contest entry
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500 points, ended May 14, 2007, 6 entries
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very creative good job
keep up the good work and good luck in my contest
stevie aka txangel10
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Thank you so much for entering . Though this is some what short I still feel the emotions here. BOY can I relate! lol I'm head over heals for someone that lives in a nother state so when we talk on the phone it feels like heaven to me. I really enjoy reading things that make me feel or remind me of my own feelings. Thank you for following the rules and thank you agian for the enter and good luck!
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this is so beautiful! i love the structure and rhyme, it really added to the poem.
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Beautifully written. Good job.
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This is a great poem! keep up the good work
Thank you for entering my contest <3
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Wow this is lovely, it's short but doesn't feel that it is lacking in any way; it is complete.
You most cetainly are a talented writer, thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading more of your submissions
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