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I hate you

It's not like you didn't know that
He was a dangerous boy
A bad boy
That he was going to hurt you
Everything led up to this
You know it was going to happen
On a night like this you gave him your love
Usually I'd be mad at him, but you deserve it

Author notes

I don't really hate anyone, it just turned out this way. *shrug*

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  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 24, 2008

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    Good poem short but you made your point. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck
    ..<3..
    Shelly


  • shadow-of-the-sun
    May 2, 2007

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    definately interesting, i guess this could be taken as either you scolding yourself for a preconcieved mistake or you scolding a friend for making a stupid mistake. either way, i enjoyed it coz it made me analyze it. good work.