Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Shelter

Shelter

Debilynn who’s asking a shelter in prayer,
Because her outlook on health got debatable,
Thus shaken the hope in the world around her,
Although believes in the Mighty God’s aureole.
If in nights discredit overwhelms her doubt,
Jesus Christ you’re her last final treasure bound.
If from tribulation she will need relief,
Mighty God You the only one able to fill.
She seeks encouragement, God please give her light.
Remind her Jesus; your ways are the true ride,
Because who follows you, gets salutation,
Jesus you are the way, no other road-guide
To the everlasting life of the salvation,
Please help her to get the intimacy with God.
-Amen-       

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • debilynn gold member
    May 8, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    thank you for this lovely prayer. i feel most humbled. keep writing! God bless you always

  • idomok
    May 1, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    Thanks for the comment on my sonnet;
    in our trying-hours, intimacy with God
    is the best medicine you can someone
    as suggest and with consent to grant.


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    May 1, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    "Jesus you are the way, no other road-guide
    To the everlasting life of the salvation,"
    Jesus is our guide, our rock , our shepherd, and our light.
    Thank you for your thoughts and prayers for Debilynn, and for entering this contest!