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Anger

Anger blisters a tender soul
introducing virgin sensibilities to rage
as innocence is violated by indecency
in a world that no longer protects it's children.

copywrite 2007
Tamera Dobbins
all rights reserved

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  • Lj-
    May 2, 2007
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    I like this. It's harsh.


    Thank you for entering,
    Best of luck.


  • debilynn gold member
    May 1, 2007

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    this is a wonderful write! very intense without being complicated or lengthy. thank you for sharing this. Keep writing! God bless you always