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i told you

you asked me who i am
i told you
"to take a closer look
if you look at my eyes
you will see my youths innocence
if you look at my smile
you can see its parshly fake
if you look at my face
you can see that hidden beauty
just waiting to comeout"
you asked me who i am
and i told you

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  • in-the-twilight
    May 1, 2007

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    This is really good... that's who I am too... wow... it's something I can totally relate to! Rock on! xoxox Meg