I, like a levithian am coiled,
Whilst you tread the ghostly waters above.
With all the carelessness of
Some stately ship.
Beware, I will wait for you, and
One day I will embrace you.
Ah love! To embrace you-
To smell you- to win you!
Sleep with me forever, and
The waves will rock us both to sleep.
Let others sail on their ships
Built of whimsical dreams and fancies!
A leak has already sprung-
They will falter, and fail,
One stormy, fateful night.
We will have peace, joyous peace.
Isn't that what you've always wanted?
No, no, I will be Lillith instead.
Isn't the fruit pleasing?
I hope that it pleases you.
It is yours for the picking.
Yours, that is, if you are
Willing to face the consequences.
It is not poisonous, merely forbidden.
I am your equal- your equal in all.
You were first, but
You will never be better than me.
Sorry to deceive you, love,
But doesn't fruit always taste
Better when it's forbidden?
We will have peace, joyous peace.
Isn't that what you've always wanted?
This is our Paradise-our Garden.
And these forbidden fruits will lead the way.
Author notes
Hey, I'm 13, so I have every right to suck so ha . Nah not really. Ok so I think this is decent I guess...hopefully
Please tell me what you think
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DECENT? YOU GUESS?
hell yes! this is frickin amazingggggggggg!!!!!!!!!! ohwowohwowohwow!!!!! its flow is very nice, very nice, and so many large words! they add such a nice touch, yes? oh i think so... well i'm going on and on again.... you are a very gifted poet. i will have 2 read MUCH more of your work!!!
MUCH ENCOUREGMENT,
~*MG*~
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I guess I guess...I guess...okay I just confused myself and I have no idea wow or how lol...anyways thank ya so much for the comment!
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