During autumn days
Gently falling to the ground
Forms a stream of leaves
The tree once blooming
A time for new beginnings
seasons now changing
Leaves changing colour
from green to different shades
Softly falling down
Trees now standing bare
Through the change of the seasons
Awaiting new growth
Fast asleep creatures
Awaiting the spring time warmth
Among the coldness
In the winter rain
and the sun shining in spring
Trees blossom again
A graceful song sung
Singing softly to the sun
Spring has now begun
Flowers are blooming
Clouds depart, scents fill the air
Creates a vision of art
Bright streaks fill the sky
The hot dry sun shining bright
Summer takes over
Beauties of the earth
Naturally created
The essence of time
The seasonal creations
Summer, autumn, winter, spring
As the world creates
A contest entry
- haiku me by maybememories.
468 points, ended May 9, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Absolutely glorious ...
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Wow now that's a serious Haiku chain!
Wonderful job presenting all the season that flow nicely from one to the next..congrats on your award. Thank you for sharing, have a beautiful day, Ken IBT
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Bliss
How
wonderful
the writing
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nice poem, good luck with the competition
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beautiful
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Beautiful !
This is awesome. I wish you all the best of luck in this contest
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Great job. Stands alone and flows together. Seasonally superb.
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Love it
I love good poetry about Seasons because it always brings you so close to Nature and Life. This realy has done both.You have tied them together beautifully.
I realy cant pick out any group or individual lines that stand out over and above any of the others.
This is tallent personified, keep up the good work.
I don't think I have said this about any other poems before but if this was my contest it would definately be Gold Material.
Good Luck in the Contest.
ARLIE
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