Bright eyes creak in the music.
The most surprising thing
has long been sharply observed lyrics
in a seasick croon.
Ambitious poet-romantic of musical prodigy
shook off the hangover.
Please tell me what you think
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I like this poem, and I like how you carry the image of the ship throughout the lines. Can I ask if I'm right about what it's generally saying? Is it that the speaker longs to be a lyricist but belongs in the field of composing?
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To be honest, this was actually another "Found" poem. I basically just took a random magazine article and starting circling words that sounded cool together. ^^; Although, when I go back and look at it, what you said does seem to make a lot of sense. Thanks for the comment!
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