The last fatal unspoken nights,
Holding in all my grudges, letting go frights.
Feeling vitality drawn upon my skin,
Rejecting to lose, hoping to win.
Letting all emotions fade away,
Losing saliva, thy red fleshing blood stay,
Die tomorrow, or another day,
Asking death, is it the way?
Brutally, vicious, aggressive smile,
Asking to breathe, just for a while.
The fleshing blade peel my skin,
To die with an unforgiving sin.
Prayed upon thy holy cross,
Uncovered the tragic loss.
Telling you my hurtful lies,
Looking deep in your despiteful pity eyes.
You’ll never become more of what you are,
Never feel my pain, however far.
Locked down in Satan’s cage,
Lying here holding my rage.
As I lay upon Satan’s abyss,
I slit on last wrist.
Waiting on a brutally death,
Farewell life, its taking thy last pitiful breath…
Please tell me what you think
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This poem is amazing! I can tell you poored your whole soul in this. This is realy good!
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I love this!! no words can explain it
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breathless
really dark poem! but then again its really kool, i really like it! well much luv
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nicce!
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shit this is a good poem
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this is really goos using alot of big words...this is the best
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Lol, I think this is a better poem, very different from the rest... maybe it's because you've use punctuation and the other uses of trying a more brad range of volcabulary...
Good job! 
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wow this is a really deep poem. i really liked it. well gtg bye,
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Wow...Just wow this is one of the best writes I've read on here so far. It made me feel every word you wrote..It's just amazing.
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I hope this is not something you are going through right now..if it is STOP! Pick up the pen and continue writing...I can loan you my key to Satans cage and unlock it for ya....
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great write! this is deff. one of the best writes that I heave read since a while! you should keep posting because this one really did make my day! (poetry-wise)
I loved every bit of it and keep up the good work. -
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well thank you. and u too keepit up. well pce out friendster of all friendsters..jk...lol....666metal! lol
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i feel just like dat girl lol
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