dripping feellings of remorse
dripping tears of agony
peeling off the cold harsh mask
uncovering your misery
crying words of painful times
trying to ignore the hate
try to get it from your thoughts
given more than you can take
dropping dreams in a pool
watching them swirl away
trying to find new ones
try to find the words to say
wishing you could take it back
but you know it's too late
try to change all of your world
try to change your destined fate
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hiding away your fears
killing away your pain
it lengthen out your years
but makes your tears like rain
feeling the harsh truth
like for the fist time
might have changed your view
but you didn't change your life
:chorus
trying to change your heart
try to ignore how you feel
cover it from the world
tell yourself it isn't real
completely deserved punishments
riping through your very soul
slowly it gets so much stronger
and soon you can't take anymore
shining hatred in their eyes
you quickly try to look away
but you mind is frozen still
and your eyes can't help but stay
lips are trying so hard
to speak the words you feel inside
but like your honesty
your voice went away to hide
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shattering your icey heart
searching for another chance
pleading to get it back
if only for a glance
stairing at an empty wall
hoping it will come to life
feeling like you've been let down
screaming that it isn't right
tearing away at your heart
shed off your impurities
see if it will clean you out
see if it will set you free
crying out at the stars
blame them for all the wrong
say they did this to your life
scream you know what's going on
:chorus 2x:
dripping feelings of remorse
dripping tears of agony
peeling of the cold harsh mask
uncovering you misery
Author notes
what do ya think???
much luv~
kitty
Please tell me what you think
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Thankyou Thankyou!!
your very sweet and deserve something in return!!
much luv~
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This is actually quite beautiful though it's a kind of dark poem. It's true how often we hide what's in our hearts and it turns us into a sorrowful, sad, cold creature. I am from the Black Blood Rose group but I require nothing in return, it's your choice. It was a pleasure to read this poem
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very nice. i liked it alot. a few things were off but i'm picky so its prolly just me. great work. keep it up. i'm glad you sent this to the group.
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thankyou!!!!!!
much luv~
kitty
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Kinda cliched. Feeling has one l and it's icy not icey. Otherwise you might have something here. Keep it up xoxox

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