Pain, Regret
Total miss-interpretation
Remource, Alone
Complete miss-calculation
Why
Did I
Believe you ever cared?
You lied
I cried
But I'm no longer scared
It's done
It's over
To me its like your dead
You might
As well
Put a bullet in your head
Give up
It's gone
I no longer cry
Now
It's time
To shut up and say good bye
Cuz I took
My tears
And kept them in a cup
Now all
Thats left
To say
Is
Your Fucked.
Author notes
Pretty self explanitory I think.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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gret job nice flow good imagrey your pain comes through well on this poem.
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wow this is such a great poem. excellent job on this. I am sorry that things did not work out and this is an excellent way to show that you don't want to deal with it anymore and finally say goodbye. i really like how you used the wording in here and the way that it flows. excellent job.
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