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"Writer's Block"

I've exhausted the muse:
She is dripping decomposition,
The flies buzzing their caterwauls
Like sheep.

Shackled and shanked
My muse wavers,
A Frankenstein
Lumbering against the panorama of villagers,
Howling of how the china tells no lies.

She moans of dolls and mirrors,
Weaving stories of their deceit.
Blasphemous is she,
How very blasphemous:
I command obeyance
Yet she dares to balk and remiss.
Mutiny!

Ach,
I grow tired of her victimization.

Author notes

I had writer's block, so I wrote about that. I don't really like it, but *shrugs* they can't all be winners, eh?

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  • xXxbecca10o8o7xXx
    May 11, 2007
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    enjoyed reading this good luck in the contest


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    May 9, 2007

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    A first I do believe. Thanks for straightening old WRITERS BLOCK out Ha. Ha. Good write Good Luck in the Contest

  • clulesgamdgirl
    May 2, 2007

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    well i like this too. good personification and humor. awesome vocab too. you impressed me, and thats pretty hard to do. good job.

    graci


  • soulangel1500
    May 1, 2007

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    lol it is still a great poem and never thought I'd find a poem of writers block so plus on the originality, images and simlies.

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