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Little Brother

My dear little brother,
are you coming after me now?
You will never beat me
but it will be amusing to see you try.  
Allow your hate and thirst for revenge
to fule your power.

Come and get me.

My dear little brother,
do you care about your new friends?
Maybe I will destroy them
like I destroyed our family,
our mother and father.
Are they weak like you
or even weaker?
Before I leave to find out,
come and get me.

My dear little brother,
I am eagerly awaiting the day
when we will meet again
and I will prove to you
once and for all
that you can never beat me.

Author notes

I don't watch Naruto all that much, but I do know a couple of things about it, like Saske wants to kill his brother.

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  • The Cube
    May 1, 2007
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    Great work. Definately captured the personality of Itachi quite well.


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    May 1, 2007

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    I like your poem.... but your parents...brothers.... and some other people around you I wouldn't want to be...  you are a bad Ninja.... I enjoyed reading this poem...