i still remember our first kiss
you leaned in
took my waist
and put your arms around me
and gave me a kiss
i would never forget
you were my first
and you will be my last
i remember our every fight
i thought it would be the end
but all it was
it was another obstacle
we had to go through
the memories i had of you
as i think about it now
brings tears to my eyes
and i cant stop crying
because you were
the best thing that ever happened
you will always be close to me
in my memories and in my dreams
Author notes
Written July 23rd, 2003
A contest entry
- Past Memories by SilverxXxShadow.
250 points, ended July 24, 2003, 27 entries
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This is a nice write...so emotional. I really enjoyed it. Your words were really together and flowy in this piece. I like the ending:
"you will always be close to me
in my memories and in my dreams"
so sweet...well this is a lovely piece. Thank you for entering my contest...good luck.
~Shadow
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