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Magnificent Day

Silvery light reflects off moon
Casting shadows of days gone by
Holding tight the cherished memories
Breathing in the sweet fragrance
Captivated by love and warmth
Of yesterday's hopes and dreams
Bringing glittering tears to my eyes
Hand out stretched in loving accord
To brush the hand of lost loved ones
Eagerly awaiting the magnificent day
That Heaven will be underneath my feet
As I gaze at the golden gates
And see the face of Jesus
Glory lights the pathways
And love is the atmosphere
Forever held in the arms of grace

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  • Pietro456
    May 2, 2007
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    Excellent !

    I really, really like thia one. Keep up the great work.


  • Heavens Child
    May 1, 2007

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    Oh, this is such a beautiful write, giving fabulous imagery of what is to come for believers. You've painted a picture that leaves this heart filled with anticipation. Awesome write. Thanks for the entry in my contest.


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    May 1, 2007

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    Beautiful write of what awaits us in Heaven. The best of your's I've read, I believe! This line gives me the chills: "To brush the hand of lost loved ones"

    Fluid, lovelt, full of grace.


  • infactuated love
    May 1, 2007
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    This is really good!
    Good luck in the contest