I entered through the heavy set of doors into the dimly lit room, that was already prepared by my slave, my little bitch. You see he knew just how I liked things to be with just a few candles lit on the night table and over the bed on the wall. The curtains were drawn shut and the toys laid out properly and the bed was prepared with the restraints in place. He was also to be groomed and waiting for me in his cage by 9pm as he was.
I wearing just a black thong and thigh high boots, strolled across the floor to were my slave was kneeling, head bowed within his steal compound. Good evening and how is my little bitch tonight, "very well Mistress" he replied. I'm glad to see you have everything in it's place, good. My dear bitch do you remember the other night when you disappointed me, your performance wasn't up to my liking hmmm... "yes Mistress" he replied. When I gave you your collar with it came the understanding of love, responsibility and a commitment to your Mistress, but you let me down the other night, so tonight you will receive a punishment like none other "yes Mistress" he replied.
I unlocked and opened the door to his cage and attached the leash to his collar as I instructed him to get down on all fours. Leading him to the center of the room I stopped and turned to him and asked, do you like my boots "yes Mistress" he replied, show me how much you like my boots I, want you to worship my boots. He began by kissing and licking at the tips and then the soles, he took the heel of my boot into his mouth and began to suck on it gliding it in and out of his mouth like he would occasionally do when I had a strap-on on me, he worked his way up my boots being careful not to miss even an inch, enough....such a good little bitch you are.
I led him to the rack on the wall, but first I wanted to close off all his senses for this experience that my slave was about to endure. I placed a ballgag in his mouth so he would not be able to scream out his cries, then a blindfold over his eyes so he would not be able to see what was about to happen and earplugs so he would not be able to hear anything. I then backed him up to the rack and buckled his ankles down and raised his arms and strapped them in, now I had complete control over my slave to do what ever I wanted.
I walked over to the table of toys which looked liked a buffet table at a BDSM party. First I chose nipple clamps and fasten them to his nipples, turning the knob just a little tighter making sure he felt this but I guess the muffled sounds coming from him was a clear indication. I smiled and kissed his cheek. Then I picked up the ball-clamps placing them on either side of his scrotum and I attached 2oz weights to each one for just a little more pull. Stepping back looking at my little bitch I thought what a lovely pathetic sight.
I reached for a flogger and proceeded to whip his chest concentrating on his clamped nipples,I could see his face distort with each lash. I then lashed at his manhood watching his legs shake each time the flogger would strike. After a few moments of this I knelt down in front of him gently grasping his cock with one hand stroking it and with my other hand I began to play with the weights attached to his scrotum, leaning in I let my lips glide across the tip of his cock and down his shaft, licking and sucking on him feeling him pulse in my mouth becoming harder and harder, rock hard, I removed my lips from him and chose my next implement of torture, a sound, choosing the proper size I began to gently insert the rod into the tip of his cock I knew he was feeling this as I could hear his muffled cries and his legs shake and butt jerked, I continued to slowly insert the rod until about 8 inches were inside his cock and a few outside. I then began to gently tap on the sound sending vibrations down the center of his cock, his whole body began to quiver and shake I could also hear the muffled cries, his body trying frantically to escape. You see this was something new to my slave, something he had never experienced before, I continued to gently tap on the rod watching him flinch as his cock jerked each time.
This scene was exciting me, I found my hand reaching for my breast playing with my nipples, squeezing and pinching harder each time, my breath becoming heavy, I wanted some attention. It was time to stop this torturous punishment I needed some explosive pleasure. So I removed the blindfold, the gag, and the earplugs, looking at the face of my slave I could see there were tears in his eyes I wiped them away and kissed each one then kissing his cheeks and lips tenderly. I then removed the clamps from his nipples and softly massaged them. Then I lowered myself down in front of him and removed the clamps from his scrotum and now the rod from his cock, I knew this would hurt so with one quick jerk I pulled the rod, listening to him scream out in pain. Did you enjoy your punishment "yes Mistress" he replied still with tears in his eyes.
I led my bitch over to the bed as I sat down at the edge I had told him to kneel down before me and pleasure me the way that I like. Leaning back on the bed with my legs spread and my little bitches face between them. He began to lick and suck on my mound feverishly the way I like it mmmm.....yes you are doing so well bitch. His fingers began to explore my insides. I felt shivers of excitement as his fingers pumped my pussy and his mouth dancing on my mound, oooh...this feel so good ....mmmm..yes.. what a good little bitch you are to please Mistress but you know what I really like don't you "yes Mistress may I have permission to go get your favorite toy" he asked yes you may. My slave knew just what I wanted, he came back with my pink rabbit slowly inserting all the way in till it reached my back walls mmmm........ he turned it on medium power and began to fuck me hard with it, my clit being teased each time my vibrator filled my pussy oooh...... yes bitch fuck me..........fuck me hard.. I want to feel all of it. Then he turned it on full power my ass bucked as shivers ran throughout my body, oh my god.........yes...yes...fuck me .........please me..........make me cum.......yes........ooooh yes........ a wave exploded throughout my body as my juices flowed from me my back arched spasm after spasm. I began to slowly subside as the vibrator was removed my slave leaned in to indulge himself drinking my nectar sucking all that he could.
Thank you my dear bitch slave, I hope you have learned your lesson tonight, "yes Mistress" he replied now run me a bath and put everything away.
A contest entry
- Erotic writes on Humiliation, Hardcore BDSM and Taboo Sex by slipperssun.
1750 points, ended May 2, 2007, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A VERY KINKY AND EROTIC PIECE (IN MORE WAYS THAN ONE) TO SAY THE LEAST!
This piece was even better the second time around and had me harder than a teen who had inadvertently taken his Old Man's monthly supply of Viagra all at once and found his Dad's collection of KINKY DVD'S while no one else was home! Being a good pet I refrained from pulling my cock to this HOT PIECE as I've been taught to ask a lady for permission to do so first - as well as permission to lick up my creamy mess after the deed is done!
Peace & Love!
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you sure know how to put man in his place, im wanting to learn how to write erotic poetry im nervous about what people might think i was wondering could you help me out please,
loved the write just wish i could have the nerve to write how i feel like you do
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Well thank you for your comment. This piece I wrote was more of a hardcore BDSM in fact i'm not sure I would call it erotic I would call it out right porn... LOL... If you want to learn more about erotic writing just do a lot of reading from this sight, there are so many different styles of erotic from soft to very hardcore I find it hard to write soft. Don't worry about what people think, everyone starts some wheres, write something short in poem form just to see how ya do. Let me know if you come up with something.
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lol i get what mean lol well im the oposite woman to you ide rather be tied up and told what to do (punished) lol but i cant put it into words i guess im just worried of what people will think.
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Wow
I'm not that into tortured men (I prefer dominant women to dominate other women), but this made me shiver with delight. You have a very special gift my friend.
I definately think I'll look through the rest of your work, maybe before I enter my own stories.
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Masterfully Written
Wow... My heart's racing, and my fingers are slightly trembling.. Incredible. You've described with such eloquency and precision, one of my many fantasies... I mean, exactly. The Toy of Punishment of course was different, but I will keep those delightful sound rods in mind. You really put me there, as if your hands were mine, seeing through your eyes the slave convulsing in front of me... Exquisite. What a rush. Thank you so much for this, and you deserve the gold. If there were anything more precious and valuable than that... well, if they made a trophy out of diamonds. That'd be a sight, eh? lol Beautiful piece of sadistic desire... And now I'm officially turned on while at work, XD! Damn, and yay, lol. You have a gift, my friend.. Never cease to let it shine through your words. Much love and peace.
~S.
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"now I had complete control over my slave to do what ever I wanted." - with all due respect Ma'am - knowing your slave, I can guarantee that you have him this way on a permanent basis
oh my - now THAT is an original idea - the sound vibrations
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Damn, this only got The SIlver!
It's a GOLD TROPHY WINNER - if you ask me, Mistress Rose! You are a experienced Mistress, indeed - and know how to train and keep your naughty pet in line! I have to admit that this pet was very naughty as he had to sroke and cum BUT being a well trained pet - i licked up all of my creamy cum - which was quite a hugh load - as i haven't been allowed to cum for many, many days!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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Why thank you for your comment. Hmmmmmm.....it sounds like you have been very naughty and need to have your own punishment...
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breath taking
I have never been able to write stories like this, but it leaves me speechless when i read yours. It must be an honor to be one of your bitches, To learn the lessons that you teach, and be there to obey any and all commands that you wish for. I found myself imagining it was me who deserved the punishment, because it made me feel worthy.
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I thank you for your comment and glad you liked it. It was a bit hardcore but then thats the way I write, I have a hard time trying to write sensual or soft erotic. Hope you can take the time to read some more.
MistressRose
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OH WOW!!!
I dont think i have any more words hehehehe
im too hot to even think
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ohhhh, this is good, this is good, i like this, you did a heated job on it, welcome back, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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wow now that was intensive... i love the way that you punished him.... it was all about your pleasure and he was made to know that for sure... i like the rod part and the worshiping of the thigh highs...well done . thanks for the entry into our contest and i wish you well
cheers
Jen
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WOW
Truly amazing! This is one of those gems that only comes around occasionally, and when it does, it speaks to the heart! Showing true love and understanding, not to mention experience in a often misunderstood life choice, I congratulate You on an increasable write.
~DragonSong~
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I had to read this again, and under this name so I can applaud it again, damn this story gets me so damn horny...hehehehe
Love Your submissive little bitch
ktulu
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Holy.........ummmmmmmmmmm I am so beyond horny now after reading this. The was you wrote this is unlike anything you have ever done before. OK...uhhh yea, I am going outside for a cig now.
I love you so very much
Patrick
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