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Much More Than Just, Beautiful



When my eyes set on you, I can not look away
The sound of your voice,the understanding in your words

My heart feels connected to a world,
I've only seen in my dreams.

You are the kind of Beautiful, women strive to be

And yet, you show that beauty, with ease
The kind of beautiful that starts from within

Your heart

And spills out into the shape of your eyes
The curve of your hips, the shine in your smile

The kind of beauty that takes my breath away

A Beautiful that stops my world from spinning
shinning so brightly, all I can see is you




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I was thinking of one of my greatest friends, and how she is everything that makes a person beautiful. Not just the beauty God gave her on the outside, but a heart, of pure gold.

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  • Peteskid gold member
    February 7, 2008

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    this is about beauty and it is filled with light, life is in so many ways the sum of the moments we find love and beauty in the world, people in our lives... so i appreciate this on more than one level...and it is wonderful...PK


    • SeptemberFaith
      February 7, 2008
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      EXACTLY. Life is the sum of moments we find love and beauty in the world..... so perfectly put! =)


  • poetryality silver member
    May 1, 2007

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    I am nearly sure I know who this poem is in tribute to and I agree with every word. There is a beauty that can be seen beyond any flaw. A beauty that is timeless, that abounds and permeates the room when they walk in. This is a beautiful poem as well. These words are priceless. I know she appreciates you as much as you do her and the love is mutual. A wondrous poem here my sister.



    Much Love Always ♥

    Renee

    • SeptemberFaith
      May 1, 2007
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      Hey Beautiful. I have few friends, I dont think that is because I am unlikable but mostely, because I am very picky as to whom I let in my world. This poem, describes probably every single one of my girlfriends. A beauty I am sure you too can appriciate. I see you in the same light you know, filling my life with joy from the inside out, you shine brightly in my eyes Renee, so beautiful.

      I love you and thank you for your comment. I am always thinking of you. Criss

  • Just4u
    May 1, 2007
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    The kind of beauty that is achieved through the act of of not trying but simply allowing to be...

    Hugs...Eddy

    Like Popeye says...I am what I am
    You see hun when we "try" to be a better person we are but acting a part. All that is necessary is to just be...

    • SeptemberFaith
      May 1, 2007
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      Thank you Eddie. *hugs* You make me smile. And you are right, we have to be ourselves, that is when our true beauty shines through.


  • misselaineous
    May 1, 2007
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    a lovely tribute to your friend

    • SeptemberFaith
      May 1, 2007
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      Thank you my friend. I am glad to see you around. I have missed you! I see beauty everyday. The flowers growing on the side of the road, the sun shinning a little too brightly, a hug when you need it most. You know. Beautiful, is usually what I find in my friends, and it's this kind of beauty described above. I see that beauty in you too

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