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*Loves Phoenix*

Every night I play the same song before I go to sleep,

Every night I look to the sky and say I love you,

Every night I dream of being with you,

Every night I become free,

 

I have never felt something so strong,

I have never wanted to go so far,

I have never wanted to be with any one so much,

Until I met you,

 

Every night I play the same song before I go to sleep,

Every night I look to the sky and say I love you,

Every night I dream of being with you,

Every night I become free,

 

I will hold you until our minds die,

I will love until the end of time,

I will kiss you passionately,

Just because I love you,

 

Every night I play the same song before I go to sleep,

Every night I look to the sky and say I love you,

Every night I dream of being with you,

Every night I become free,

 

Every time we speak I wish to be with you,

Every time we’re together I wish to never let go,

Distance brought us closer,

And I will do every thing just so I can tell you I love you,

 

Every night I play the same song before I go to sleep,

Every night I look to the sky and say I love you,

Every night I dream of being with you,

Every night I become free,

 

Let the sky cry,

Let the clouds weep,

Let the waves roll,

But nothing will part me from you,

 

Every night I play the same song before I go to sleep,

Every night I look to the sky and say I love you,

Every night I dream of being with you,

Every night I become free,

Every night my love for you grows.

Author notes

This is of course for mars,
Just remember I will always love you,

I havn't written a poem in a while,
and this is just a fraction of how I feel about her,

hope u like it
but its all true....

Please tell me what you think

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Comments

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  • piapressure
    August 19
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    Amazing

    I know how you feel about her - I feel the same about a boy


  • Lin-Z the Author
    September 29, 2008
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    wow again


  • Lin-Z the Author
    September 29, 2008
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    WOW

    if only my luck was as good.


  • aboomer silver member
    August 9, 2007

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    This is like a song - and I like the repetition of your main verse. I like the emotion and images in this. I really like the line...'let the sky cry, let the clouds weep, let the waves rolls, but nothing will part me from you.'


  • RIP Whoever
    August 9, 2007

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    this is so well done, and So red



    sweet, and full of feeling
    as well as questions from the reader. how things turned out. how things are going NOW

    thanks for commenting on my poem ~Scattered Cracks~


  • LuchiaNanami
    August 3, 2007

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    I like this!!

    If it's a song, then I like it. I like how the words show deep love in someone. Though, you never had someone to love, now you do...


  • purplebubbles
    May 1, 2007
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    Every night I find myself falling asleep,
    and wishing I could wake up to see you.
    Every night dreams take me to places i can't always be,
    but they're always with you.

  • purplebubbles
    May 1, 2007

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    Yes.
    =D
    I love you too, and you know that, or atleast, i should hope you do, i love you more than anyone could dare love.
    Distance can bring us closer, i just wish it wasnt so far, that we didn't have to wait 6 months before a hand on a phone, can be a hand in hand , to a lips to lips.
    Though i cant wait to see you, in like three weeks, and all the exitement on my side around that of escaping and stuffs =).

    I love you

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