Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Your Love

you came
to me like a dream

taking me

in your arms

bringing sunlight
to a darkened soul

making me believe

in happiness,

desires

and dreams

 

 

You've made

me whole

 

I'm now complete

Author notes

just playing with words

picture: http://dl6.glitter-graphics.net/pub/137/137036r070bwapjy.jpg

In a list

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • penman gold member
    October 12, 2007
    Edit | Reply

    Excellent

    Some playing with words. You did it so well.


  • Endeavor gold member
    June 5, 2007
    Edit | Reply

    Just reading again


    Rick


  • penman gold member
    June 3, 2007
    Edit | Reply

    Wonderful

    So well done and touching. Written from the heart.


  • Endeavor gold member
    May 23, 2007
    Edit | Reply

    Excellent


    Wonderfull statement of affermation

    You play with words as I do

    with an open heart

    Rick