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By The Mind

Burn me, I pray
With tepid waters over my pallid torn skin
Oh, broken shell what you are now
This is what I'll become
Shallow breathing, I hold you firmly
With all life slipping away
And like no grip on reality
Tomorrow will again be the same!
Secure me tight, death bringer
Hug me in your sinful eyes
Betrayer
I am cradled in angst
Fury previously unreleased
Lover, hater, glorifier
This blood on my hands fall to dusk
Here, in paradise, nothing is without
My torture, ends here
Right where I meant it
I'll leave it










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  • Zealous
    May 4, 2007

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    Won't leave a long comment. Very poetic... flows nicely... like the content and the cryptic meaning that you don't even seem sure of.
    Likes muchly.


    • Black Panic
      May 8, 2007
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      Hey, thanks for the commento. Muchly appreciated. Hmm, my teacher bagged it out saying that the meaning wasn't clear - even when I wrote on the back the meaning! Lol catch xx

      • Zealous
        May 12, 2007
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        Stupid teacher, not everything needs a meaning, some things should be interpreted your own way so it has more meaning to you.