Come to me my little blade
The scars you`ve left
Have begun to fade
I need you to heal me once more
I want to see blood
Drip to the floor
My shiney blade so cold, so sharp
Oh come and mend
My broken heart
Your jagged blade, my little sin
It feels so good
As you pierce my skin
We are best friends, you and me
Those crimson lines
I love to see
Oh where were you so long ago
Lets rest and watch
My blood flow
My little friend , so good to me
You make me feel alive
And Free.
Author notes
My other poem fatal mistake is more true to my experience of self harming but i like to view things from all sides.
A contest entry
- I AM CUT by darkalesyse.
650 points, ended April 9, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think.
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I cant add anything that others havent said already its very good, it gives an almost plesant sound to a very solum subject
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Kiana
I liked it. Thats how i feel
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it's a very good poem,.. and has ever so much meaning to it and emotion in it....
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as i admit i was writing a piece very similar to this and it does make u feel everything u discribed in this piece..
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Anther great write and another I can relate to. good job
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Unfortunately, I must admit that I have actually done this and it does make me feel alive and free. Talk about your deadly sins. LOL. jk
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i liked it
very creative and insprational
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Beauty in darkness...I strong write of emotions and depth...very relatable with great flow and meaning...excellent job!
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DEEP and real talk amy
I told you, that your words have Beauty from deep within your thoughts, very though provoking words you have here dear. I am so happy to have had the chance to read such elegance.
All the best,
Ephiphany
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wow. when you said you were crap compared to me that was BULLSHIT. this is really good!!
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Reminds me of a poem I wrote the other day. I love the way this is written. Great job and thanks for the comment on my poem.
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i absolutely love this poem, wonderfully written!!
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I need you to heal me once more
Beautiful. You should enter this in to my contest. This line alone tells a great story. You need something that opens wounds to heal you. Great write, it flowed perfectly and the ryhmes weren't forced at all. Thanks for sharing!
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well written
Well written but such a sad poem. It is always painful to think that there is so much hurt within another. There are other ways to heal the pain and I just hope that people that read your poem and need to do this to themselves find the love within that will show them a different way to heal.
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again, i can really relate as you know [last night, unfortunately.. my guilty "pleasure"] but anyway.. nice write. ima add you as a favorite ;P lol
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well written and I hope a past not present poem..
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Sad but heart felt. WELL WRITTEN!
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thankyou my poem is so old now! it was all very true at the time need to put some new stuff on x
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Well, it's always good to see things from all angles... I have to say, it felt a little emo-ish to me, but a creepier sort of emo... Hate to rain on your parade, but I'm just being honest. Best of luck with your writing!
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hi immortal, jut catching up with things here. what is an emo?? i come from uk dont go to school so what does it mean to me to be an emo? i think to have such a casual comment like that u have no idea what devestation self harm can do
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Oh, I see... Here in Canada/the USA, an "emo" is an attention-whoring fake-cutter. Whereas someone who self-harms will cut and hide the scars, "emos" will cut in obvious places and show them off to anyone with a pair of eyes. The thing with emos is that cutting is a serious problem, and it frustrates me that the little fakers are turning it into a joke and making it almost impossible for the cutters who actually have problems to get help.
My best friend was stuck in a psych hospital for 5 years because of a cutting problem, so trust me, I know the damage it can do. Anyway, thanks for your response.
Blessed be,
Laura xxx -
Oh, I see... Here in Canada/the USA, an "emo" is an attention-whoring fake-cutter. Whereas someone who self-harms will cut and hide the scars, "emos" will cut in obvious places and show them off to anyone with a pair of eyes. The thing with emos is that cutting is a serious problem, and it frustrates me that the little fakers are turning it into a joke and making it almost impossible for the cutters who actually have problems to get help.
My best friend was stuck in a psych hospital for 5 years because of a cutting problem, so trust me, I know the damage it can do. Anyway, thanks for your response.
Blessed be,
Laura xxx
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thanks for the comment on the big green monster ^-^ but this is how I feel right now~ I love this one alot...and this is very good use of rhyme~
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This is well written, but so extremely sad!
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thanks for your comment. it is a sad poem but very much true to many people x
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she's russian
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my friend dankjdirtioder is saying this
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my wrists hurt
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yup yup
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im emo
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koo
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angel64199
i dont get what your trying to say
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