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Pain

why am i crying
why am i sweating
why do i feel so much unnecessary pain

why do i live a life of drama

why aren't i normal

why can't i end my pain

why do i make more

why am i bad

why am i good

why am i stupid

why am i naive

why do they know that

why do they know i brake

why do they know i'm easy

why do they harm me

why do i harm myself

why don't i end the pain

why can't i end the pain...

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just another bad day, another very bad day

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  • XHollowXEyesX
    May 1, 2007

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    THis is such an emotional write. Although with each line starting with the word 'why' may make it seem overpowering on the meaning, I believe it adds to the realism of the piece, it makes it seem as if I am reading it as you are breaking down and just screaming things out. straight from the heart.
    If that makes any sense.

    Keep your head up
    All the best
    ~Hollow~