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Music Never Dies

me oh my
through the depth of time
i found the memory
of my love and crime
sway this way dance on dance on
I'm not a pet
i love this song
pick a pocket
steel some jewels
I'm not a human so
i wont regret
the things Ive saute
have all been bout
i need no introduction
no help nothing
I'm the monkey on the street
dancing to put meet
on my owners table

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Written July 23rd, 2003

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  • SilverxXxShadow
    July 24, 2003
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    This was a...er...different piece....a different kind of memory than most of us. It was a very interesting poem. I enjoyed it though. Thank you for entering my contest...good luck.

    ~Shadow

  • Boiled Candy
    July 23, 2003
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    nice work, keep writing I wanna c more


  • Brucie
    July 23, 2003
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    Good work, although a couple of spelling errors, is saute supposed to be sought and bout supposed to bought. Other than that some good work.