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of monsters and beds

 

 


     [ Darfur.Iraq.Mozambique.Bali ...

                     WTC.Virginia Tech.London ... ]

monsters gather beneath society's bed, while
finger-bars lock mind away
behind the visions shared ...
in blue


childhood discoveries:
what we cannot see, cannot hurt us
but if it sees us ... will it be hurt?

 

our parents taught us the art of denial -

what will we teach our little ones?

 

(perhaps) 

 

that it is never enough to look ...
without seeing

 

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  • Naridill
    October 31, 2007
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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    May 1, 2007

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    How great is this...wise and forces me to remember "Shhh, jsut ignore it..." "Sh, what will people think..."
    Youa re right...how did we train our chidren..to see...to acknowledge...to stand up to...?
    Good job on this.

  • RottenXHeartX
    May 1, 2007
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    Great!
    'The art of denial" so very true.
    A brilliant message X