My life has turned
the sullen color of grey.
Not pure enough for white,
not lost enough for black.
And so I remain; teetering on the edge.
A contest entry
- Appealing Colors, Darkened Souls by EatYourSunlight.
300 points, ended May 16, 2007, 25 entries
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Ok, many people know that I'm not much into short poetry but this one, in my mind, is just perfect. I love the way you took the grey, the middle of happiness and sadness and was able to put that simple emotion to such strong words with such a short poem. Even if it's a simple poem, it still speaks volumes. This one is definately one of my favorites
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AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is sad.*tears in eyes*.Sometimes though I have to say I felt the same way.I love your poem,it feels like...like..i don't know,but it's got some kind of feeling to it.
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wow i like how you are im between. it kindof shows alot about you only in few words. realy good write.
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very well done and written. I love the connections with white and black
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