Candy
Is really good!
Munching it all day long
Makes me feel so very happy
Yummy
Author notes
Cinquain poem for the group "Elf Forest"
Please tell me what you think
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bravo
Neat, nifty and extremely spiffy, not to mention very true!! bravo...bravo...bravo...
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This is such an easy to read and understand poem - brings great visuals to mind. Think everyone likes candy, don't they?
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i am more of a condy bar kind of guy, does taht count as candy, lol, but this is good, keep it flowing
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thanks for your comment both of you. I love candy and I was wanting some so I wrote my love for it in a poem. I still want some candy, hmm, I might have some...
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(curtsey) Oh m’lady! This is a perfect Cinquain, your syllable count and structure is correct. The words flowed wonderfully into a great image. Well done!
We will certainly use this spell to keep our forest safe. Thank you so much!
Love,
Princess Amera
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