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Hurt Me

Cut me open with your knife
Ignore my screams filled with ice
Keep my secrets away from me
Take my sorrows as your glee
Pay my debts of irony
Let my pain set you free
Stone the birds that give me flight
Shake my body with broken light
Take my refusals and turn them around
Search my body for scars to be found
Change day to night and night to day
Try and take my life away

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This is another old one. I adore it.

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  • Believer in myself
    July 30, 2007
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    amazing.

    vahn. omg. i love this poem. you are amazing.


  • DeadOnArival
    May 18, 2007
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    it gave me chills...
    honestly i loved it...
    kudoz out the rear...
    : )


  • theghostofher
    May 1, 2007
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    WOW

    wow this is an awsome poem. i love the flow and it well written. i love this part the most
    'Cut me open with your knife
    Ignore my screams filled with ice
    Keep my secrets away from me
    Take my sorrows as your glee
    Pay my debts of irony'
    a great poem.
    and i love the way you ended it with'Try and take my life away '