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Life in the Red

I am the color Red
the color of Passion, of Lust, of Love
the color of Blood, of Anger, of Fire
the color that Creates, the color that Destroys
I am the color Red

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  • Ace13
    September 4, 2008

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    hey

    i like this one, it says so much about the bipolar-ness
    of the color red. i guess it just depends how you look at it. But very powerful statement with such a simple subjust and so little words. Awesome job


  • -Death-s Punchline-
    June 29, 2007

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    Well, short, sweet, and to the point. Great job and hope you did well n the contest.

    jan

  • Redtearstains
    May 15, 2007
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    I like Red, my intials spell RED. I don't know why you would care but I thought I'd add that. Anyways where was I. Oh I really liked this poem, I liked the way the first and last line were repeated, the way the positive red was in the second line, and the more negative red in the third. Good job


  • Emo Cowboy14
    May 14, 2007

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    oh damn. its realy good and strong. i like it alot. i its a good color to be i guess. lol. realy good write.

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