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biting down hot tears

my desperate delusion is my drug
drowning my senses
overwhelming my thoughts
taking over my mind

i can smell your hair
right after the shower you took before you came over
i can see your eyes
looking into my heart
i can taste your lips
hot on mine
i can feel your body
laid out on my couch
but i can't hear your voice
and as i lie here alone
i realize that all i'm staring lovingly at is a blank wall
and i cry
oh, god, i cry

so let me cry
so we can part
and we can both be happy again

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it's not supposed to be good

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  • Fire-Pistil
    June 10, 2007

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    Dayam, im really tired so i wont beable to give this pice its due, but even though its very heavy with sadness it never gets too emo. i like it very much, it willmake my dreams black ad viole


  • WorstNinjaEver
    May 1, 2007

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    It's really sad. The emotion behind it maybe, it's just 'cause I know what's up, but it's good.

    Nice job - bad circumstances.