I thought I always had your heart
Although we were set apart
I trusted that you'd always care
Even though life was unfair
Now it seems I've been mislead
A truth that I will always dread
My love for you, no more returned
The heart I gave, you took and burned
This is how it looks to me
If it's not true then let me see
Show me that your love's still true
Because I'm so afraid of losing you
Author notes
favorite candy hmm...Kit-kat
A contest entry
- Prewrite " SPECIAL" by wingsofgold25.
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Thanks for entering my contest. (It's losing, not loosing. Sorry, I'm a spelling freak >.<) As for the poem, this is a very sweet and heart-breaking poem. Love how well you made it rhyme. Good luck to you in my contest.
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Short, sweet and to the point. Great job on this poem! Most people can pull of a short poem. Usually there is forced rhyming and the rhythm is off, but not here! Amazing! I loved the last line, it catched the readers heart and ends the poem beautifully. I couldn't have done it better myself.
Great job!
Ashley
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thanks so much
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This is realy a well written Poem I enjoyed reading it very much. so realistic I do believe it was from your Heart. Good Luck in the Contest
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thank you
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