He said he was dying
Dying to see me again
Missed me because he hadn’t seen me in so long
Years had come and gone
And not a day went by thinking about me
He said he was dying
Dying to hold me again
Missed me because he liked holding me
Apologized for taking our hugs for granted
And gently embraced me wholly
He said he was dying
Dying to kiss me again
Missed me because he said my kisses were sweet
Wanted more than anything to brush my lips with his
And pressed his lips against mine
He said he was dying
Dying to touch me again
Missed me because he loved the feel of my skin
Tenderly caressed my face, my neck, my arms
And ever so softly grazed my thigh
He said he was dying
Dying to love me again
Missed me because he was foolish to let me go
Regretted every moment of his mistakes
And begged me to take him back
He said he was dying
Dying to see me again
Missed me because he had to see me
Hoping to try once more
And kneeled before me to say
“I’m dying
Dying to see you
I can’t pass up this moment
To tell you I’ve always loved you
And no matter what, that will never change
I’m dying
Dying to love you
I’m not the same person you knew then
But know I want to be with you
And love you for all eternity
I’m dying
Dying to want you
I’m hoping you still feel the same
To be with me as well
And to take me as I am
I’m dying
Dying to be with you
Before my time is up
There is one more thing you need to know
I’m dying
Baby, I’m dying
But before I die,
I’m dying to make love to you
And make the moment last”
©Kevauna
4/30-2007
Author notes
I must make note that this one isn't personal. I had a dream of someone special to me way back when. This didn't happen. Purely fiction! But my dream inspired me to write this. Hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it.
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omg! that's one hell of a dream. very deep and bittersweet in a way.
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Why thank you! My dreams usually give me something good to write about. No matter how weird they turn out. The end results is always good!
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I loved the ending....it's so pure and true...
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Aww! Thank you so much! Yeah, I love to throw in endings like that! I love grabbing the readers attention like that!
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this was an interesting write. I've been so busy the last week I haven't had time to go online at all before today. keep up the great work.
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Oh excuses, excuses! LOL Kidding. Yeah, I'm hardly around much. This was what I came up with since I've been in a dryspell. I think it's been over a month or so. But thanx for reading!
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Auntie!
This was a gorgeous piece!!!
Ohh Iloved reading this one....
a piece that is so full of passion!
I have to say dreams can give us the best inspiration ever
Di
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Aw thank you!
I was quite impressed myself! Not bad since the ink in my dried up, huh? But oh yes, what an inspiration it was!
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Hmmm, you must have been tapped into my head. Well, no comment.
This was beautiful, I loved it.
Hugs!
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Aw shucks! Ain't it something though? How strange it is we can tap into each other!
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