You, darling, your going under
Welcome to [HOLLYWOOD]
Pump UP you're tits like your told you should
Here it rains red lips stick affairs
secrets hidden in the hair of every
*Superstar*Rockstar*Pornstar*
wanna be
Thats all you are to me
Glamazon girl with the baby-doll face
H
G
I
Off in the corning getting H
On your Cosmo magazine and your low fat Vanilla Chai
That girl knows how to A-S-S-E-S-C-O-R-I-Z-E
Tied up arm with needles in the skin
It's the latest fashion when your desperate to fit in
Before you were snorting pixie Stix
Now you actually need your fix
Her eyes bite to the bone with lips like ice
Vodka is the only thing that makes this slut nice
Hand on the hip while brushing her hair
Her clothes hide the wear and the tare
Broken Stilettos and heroine stash
Naked one more time with the light of a flash
This chick has all the boys, adorable little fleshy toys
When they beat her she's perfectly bruised, Your damn right this bitch Bleeds GlitteR when she's abused
Pretty little (Candy Coated) PlAsTiC girl
What happened to little Delilah
Cute as can be
What happened is she grew up
Now that's a tragedy
Author notes
Mainly inspired by "Gasoline" By seether
This is what happens when your bored and you have "Gasoline" by seether stuck in your head
(so it's not exactly about a broken heart, but the anger was from having my heart broken, the anger for the pretty little slut he went after)
(and i sometimes listen to seether when im angry
A contest entry
- ::paper::bags:: &&& &hearts plastic hearts &hearts by XweXareXbrokenX.
1050 points, ended July 13, 2007, 45 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Excellent raw emotions. =] It's very nicely written as well. Thank you for your entry and good luck.
x-Pretty-Odd-x <333 -
Nice story of the pain of struggling to compete with vanity.
"Pump UP your tits like your told you should" it shoud be you're. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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this is harsh and beautiful at the same time. wonderful devices and word uses.
H
G
I
Off in the corning getting H
On your Cosmo magazine and your low fat Vanilla Chai
i love this part
WTG!! Good luck in the contest -
oh i love this...its amazing so raw great dirty pretty i love the lines
Here it rains red lips stick affairs
secrets hidden in the hair of every
*Superstar*Rockstar*Pornstar*
wanna be
their perfectly unique and i dont find them cliche or anything...great job and i loved the musical inspiration...thanks for entering and good luck
XchaoticXdisasterX -
This is great so far. "Rains lip stick stick affairs." Wonderful imagery.
" H
G
I
Off in the corning getting H"
Is there typo here it seems a little off kilter.
Wow some of the lines in this are funny and true at the same time. This is sad... Love it thanks for the entry
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Thanks
Yeah the high part was messed up sorry, for some reason every time i do spell check it gets all weird
I fixed it though
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this is .beautiful.
love the rhyming scheme. your flow is great, words harsh, yet lovely.
I love this.
Tied up arm with needles in the skin
It's the latest fashion when your desperate to fit in
Before you were snorting pixi Stix
Now you actually need your fix
^^^^ my favorite lines, though the whole piece just stands out.
keep it up, doll
[♥]
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