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Homecoming . .

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Homecoming

 

This crazy world drives me insane

Will my man be on the plane ?

God . .Wars continue unabated

How I despise the instigators

 

Our marriage is in jeopardy it seems

Fate has cheated us . . of all our dreams

What has happened . . is far from our aim

God please help before I go insane

 

Please let my man be on the plane

God . . let me have him home again ?

Please let him survived the desert fox

Don’t return him to me . . in a box

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  • Ellis gold member
    December 4, 2007
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    GOOD

    I'm with you, Albert. Well written.
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  • BoMai gold member
    May 3, 2007
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    I could feel and share the emotions between the lines...great write!
    BoMai


  • storiesuntold
    May 1, 2007

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    I feel for you and pray you will hold him in your arms and through each of your eyes feel safe once again.

  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    May 1, 2007

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    Oh, what a plea and prayer.... the voices that cry this, cry it loud and long... ty for entering this...

  • Night Hope gold member
    April 30, 2007

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    "Our marriage is in jeopardy it seems
    Fate has cheated us . . of all our dreams"

    Poignant, indeed...& the prayer of so many...Good luck in Carol's contest, my Friend... Wanda

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