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pastel page of hope

 

 

in shadow realm

where angels sleep

a starless night

as grace of day

 

and sun is summer lies

green bereft,

upon a soul long in decay

 

a brighter light

of silver shine,

comes riding high

on roof of  eve

 

as hand to give in deeper need

 

where longing leaves

but simple touch

of tender wing,

upon a blush

of hollow cheek

 

and fair is measure

written pretty

 

ink smeared on pastel page of hope

 

to see another star

in shine

 

yet heart in dim

must take such time,

in sweeter grace

 

amending blinder eye,

to brighter beam of newer smile

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    May 1, 2007

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    "amending blinder eye,

    to brighter beam of newer smile"

    This spke to my hope that all things get better, if we eventaully push our hands away...lovely piece..evocative.


  • Desire gold member
    April 30, 2007

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    Wow!!

    Powerful piece penned and what images to stain the Mind
    Loved this one!!
    Beautifully created

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~