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My Name Is Itachi

My name is itachi,you may think of me as

a murder i killed by mother and father,

i killed my whole clan, my heart does not

shift in any single way, they meant nothing to me

they were useless i live to gain more power

and torture my little brother sasuke and

all his friends, his pitiful soul that wanders

the earth could never ever beat me, all he wants

to do is kill me his dream will never come true

i have no shame in killing anyone its nothing to me

they get in my way they'll be gone...so don't get in my way

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  • XxpuddlesxX
    January 6, 2008
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    hahaha omh i luv this.


  • a means to an end
    May 17, 2007
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    w00tage. this is totally awesome. i liked it alot. great write!!!!!


  • Yumi
    May 4, 2007

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    You bring out the dark creature inside the cute body that is known as Itachi Uchiha. All I have to say to that is bravo. Keep it up

    Erica


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    May 1, 2007

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    This is sort of scary in a way.... I'd hate to have been the parent of this Ninja.... very imaginative.. it really describes the picture


  • The Cube
    May 1, 2007

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    Very Itachi. Good work, although it seems more like a run on sentance really. But a good job anyway, defiantely captured who he is.

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