That one horrible memory...
I'll never forget it
It's carved in my skull
Vivid...it never gets dull
I loved you so much
Yes, loved not love.
I hate you now
I hate LOVE!
Why me?...
Love is so great
But many descisions...
SO MANY DESCISIONS!!
I had to pick
Between you and him
I hate to cause heartbreak
Love, its all a mistake!
You threw me against the wall
I didnt love you any more
And that made you angry
You walked out of my life, out of that door
That one horrible memory...
I'll never forget it
It's carved in my skull
Vivid...it never gets dull
Author notes
its not my best. not very descriptive. it doesnt really tell a whole memory. i had it playing in my mind, more like a movie than a poem. hey, i just had an idea! i should make a movie, lol. well i guess i liked writing it. go ahead and pick it apart.
Written July 23rd, 2003
A contest entry
- Past Memories by SilverxXxShadow.
250 points, ended July 24, 2003, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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You had some nice rhyming going on in this piece. It's an interesting poem...I like it though. I like how you used the first stanza with the last one. It seems to give the poem more strength. I really enjoyed it though. We hate love so much, yet it seems to take over our lives all the same. It's weird...oh well. Thank you for entering my contest...good luck.
~Shadow
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