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behind

You go ahead
Then I fall behind
I never even saw the signs

I always loved
and you never did
after all we are just kids

But now a crush
becomes a love
and after all you see
I'm your gift from above!!

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  • therook
    May 8, 2007
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    good

    nice short very potent maybe change the title.


  • dionne.
    May 5, 2007
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    i love this short.sweet.&&.2.the.point