The color balck describes
me well
because I am as dark as the night
sky looming over my disturbed head.
Author notes
This color describes me well.
A contest entry
- Appealing Colors, Darkened Souls by EatYourSunlight.
300 points, ended May 16, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A Personal Poem,
but it seems like you are not only describing yourself. It invites self-examination. The almost mocking critique of one self makes one wonder, am I?
Fantastic, once again thought-provoking.
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Thank you I tried my best to make the poem make the readers think ttyl
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The reader can tell that you put a lot of thought into it. That's why I love your stuff; It's so heartfelt, never a word that you don't feel!
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i love the last line! great job
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Thanks for the comment it was hard for me to come up with.
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your welcome! it was a really great poem
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