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The Song of Silent Whispers

The song of silent whispers
The aria of tears
The canticle of dreams
That transcends through the years

The unspoken melody
Forcing my soul to cry
Towards the heavens as they breathe
A relief filled sigh

The muted song in my heart
Is begging to be heard
Yet my ever practical head
Won't let it utter a word

I keep a silent message
Tucked away inside
Something that I try but fail
At trying to hide

The song of silent whispers
Becomes a soft melody
That with every minute
Grows in volume and intensity

But then as all songs must
This melody comes to an end
And the song of silent whispers
Becomes quiet again

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  • XxGoldenxXDawnxX
    May 12, 2007

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    Thank you for your beautiful entry. I loved it and how you've used the title and written a great work.